Charming Kitten

FROM CHARMING KITTEN

I read The Betrayal Narrative,

No. It is not good.

Your story is a mess. It's barely coherent spy fiction let alone a narrative that respects the craft of storytelling. I like your descriptions, it's spellchecked, but it's so hectic that it's not worth the trouble because the writing is staccato

You did not read up on Farsi. عملیات and محموله do not sound the same at all. It seems like a small error to make but a mistake so early only hurts the gravity of the betrayal aesthetic. 

I do enjoy a spy novel but there's no reason to discuss this with other security agents. This possesses no insights on psychological pressure, no cultural significance, or even a clear understanding of current events. 

What is your next big move, Graham? 

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